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A sketch of Mike I started ages ago but didn't get time to finish. It is, what I call, a "Half-Mike" sketch =p
I need honest feedback please please please : Is it good? Lacking? Does it look like Mike at all? Should I finish this?
This would REALLY help me get better :)

P.S. Ignore the scratches, I did it when I got really pissed #Fail =p
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Remember, even the smallest things can make a statement, and this as is, does make a statement. So you don't really NEED to finish it, unless the mood strikes you and you just want to give him a full face.

If you do leave it as is though, I would continue with his nose. Or the shading where his nose would be because it's noticeable that there's nothing past his eye.

And I don't know the reference you used, (because this could be exactly what the photo is with no fault of your own), but don't be afraid of putting the catch-lights in his eyes. Even in photography, with no catch-lights, the life gets sucked right out. 

But besides that I think you did a very good job. :clap: Even with a quarter of his face, it's definitely Mike.